What stayed with me is the feeling that nothing in this piece remains fixed long enough to become separate from anything else.
The body, memory, language, childhood echoes, color, roots, mirrors… everything keeps dissolving into everything around it without ever fully disappearing. Even the repetition begins to feel less like structure and more like breathing inside a dream that refuses to close. There’s something strangely tender in the way the self here never fully breaks apart, but keeps reforming through the overflow.
Thank you so much for reading so deeply and sharing such a thoughtful comment with me. You point to exactly what I hoped would come through in this piece. I didn’t want anything to feel entirely resolved or cohesive. I am especially glad you felt the tenderness in the movement. Thank you for being here.
Well that was a beautiful read, thanks Jacqueline
Thank you so much. I appreciate you reading and taking the time to comment. 🌈
My pleasure 🙏🏾🙏🏾
This was amazing! It captures the feeling of some of my past psychedelic experiences. Very well done!
Thank you so much! I am happy you are here. 🌈
The rhythm and flow of your words are mesmerizing, like a gentle stream that carries me through a landscape of emotions and thoughts. Stunning piece.
Thank you so much, sis. 🤍🌈 Always grateful for your support.
Bless you
This feels hypnotic in the best way. “Her softness stayed through damage” is an unforgettable line. <3
Thank you so much, Petra. I was hoping that would come through. 🌈
Nicely done ✅
Thank you. 🌈 I appreciate you reading and sharing.
What stayed with me is the feeling that nothing in this piece remains fixed long enough to become separate from anything else.
The body, memory, language, childhood echoes, color, roots, mirrors… everything keeps dissolving into everything around it without ever fully disappearing. Even the repetition begins to feel less like structure and more like breathing inside a dream that refuses to close. There’s something strangely tender in the way the self here never fully breaks apart, but keeps reforming through the overflow.
Thank you so much for reading so deeply and sharing such a thoughtful comment with me. You point to exactly what I hoped would come through in this piece. I didn’t want anything to feel entirely resolved or cohesive. I am especially glad you felt the tenderness in the movement. Thank you for being here.
how much color in my eyes.. it's just wonderful, thanks Jacqueline!
Thank you so much, Nick. 🌈 Appreciate you!
Lavar Burton! I love the show and song. Nicely done.
Clearly, me too. :) Thank you so much!
This is so incredible!!! 🖤🖤🖤
Thank you so much. Always appreciate you being here. 🌈
You’re so so welcome 🙏
Well that was a beautiful read, thanks Jacqueline
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Chills upon reading w i d e enough to…
Also the part about hands 🤲.
They really do contain more than we realize.