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Aaliya's avatar

Wow, this story is a masterpiece! Thalia’s transformation is both powerful and haunting. Can’t wait to see what happens next!

Jacqueline's avatar

Thank you so much, Aaliya. It was a really fun one to write. I hope to bring Thalia back for more stories soon. I always appreciate you reading and being so kind. 🫢🏼

AsukaHotaru's avatar

The curtains laughing got under my skin in the best way..!

Jacqueline's avatar

That was one of my favorite parts, too. I am so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you πŸ–€

Zephyr MezmeronπŸ‘ΎCYBEROCCULTISM's avatar

I had no idea what to expect (this was my first impression to your work) but I'm blown away by your cadence and "voice." A most delightfully arcane and empowering read.

Jacqueline's avatar

That is so kind! I appreciate you reading and taking the time to post such a thoughtful comment. It was a fun one to write so I’m glad you enjoyed it. πŸ–€

Emmett Tatter's avatar

An amazing piece! I see this a powerful allegory for β€˜breaking the silence’ of a suppressed life. I see Thalia becoming vulnerable as a literal representation of how β€˜owning one’s mess,’ provides the foundation for a rebuilt life. Fun read. Thank you✨✨✨🫑

Jacqueline's avatar

Thank you! I’m so happy you made those connections. It was a fun one to write. I appreciate you reading and taking the time for such a thoughtful comment. πŸ–€

Eliseo F.G. McCarthy's avatar

Lake Michigan in the winter always looks so beautiful!

Jacqueline's avatar

It really does. One of my happy places in all seasons. Thank you so much for sharing!

Eliseo F.G. McCarthy's avatar

Your welcome!

I only ever really see the lake from the Michigan side, so its cool to see a new angle!

LonelyRobotTheme V2.0's avatar

This is so magnificent and beautiful, I adored this piece from beginning to end! πŸ’•

Jacqueline's avatar

Thank you so much! πŸ–€ I am happy you enjoyed it. The weekly prompts are so much fun.

LonelyRobotTheme V2.0's avatar

You’re welcome ☺️ πŸ’•